ICEALATED
ICE
ICE
It was the middle of winter, and Sammy was huddled up under a old weak tree to protect her from the heavy falling snow she rinsed her hand to see a frost invading through her hand .she squints her eyes in pain as the frost bites.
Sammy knew she had to find somewhere to survive so she stood up on her two shimpy legs and put her old rugged hood over her head and set of on foot.
After two days Sammy could no longer hold herself up so she falls to the ground. she just remembered that snow is water but frozen so with all the strength she had left, she stuffed snow into her mouth. after this she had enough energy to walk toward a poor cafe in the distance they let her have a sandwich for free and she spent the night in the cafe.
She left that morning after a hard long day she found an old cracked tower with the bottom covered in blue frost.
The sun was shining and there were animals , penguins,ideas,polar bears. Sammy couldn't believe her frozen eyes ,” it..it's beautiful” Sammy knew once she enters the paradise there will be no regrets.
As perfect as it is, Sammy didn't know she would regret it ( the reason why there are so much animals is because they can't leave).. Sammy was dron to the place. as she entered she felt a slight spark and she was confused but it quickly left her mind she walked into the building “ Ha warm” Sammy said. She walked up the oldsters and found a lovely girls bedroom every thing seemed perfect.
She went down and was going to pick some yummy blueberries to eat befor she staves she sees the bush and gos to pick one but… “ ha what no .no”
Thats right Sammy couldn't get to it there was a barrier to stop her from leaving she couldnt pass. She was stuck there for ever …. Isolated in ice.
Hi Tanzi
ReplyDeleteI have just read your Isolated ice and i love it, It draws people in by just reading the first sentence. mabey use some verbs like,Sammys foot was slowly freezing, as her last puff of air. Or something but toping that all that up, really good Tanzi